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It's fun to watch it over and over.
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I liked the way you did it. It was well suited to the song, and interesting to watch even though I'm not up on my history most of those names meant nothing to me.
The art was okay, but the animation wasn't so strong. I think that you should try not to use so many tweens. The parts during the chorus and the guy playing the guitar definitely could use some improvement. The movements were pretty awkward.
But, overall, I liked it.
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Programming: 0/10
It was incredibly frustrating to try and click on things. I'm not an ActionScripter, so I don't know what the issue is. Go to the Flash Forum on this site for some advice.
Art: 0/10
Hastily mouse-drawn. You can do better than that. The backgrounds made no sense, either.
Music: 0/10
I know this song from elsewhere. I kind of like it, but what does it have to do with The Great Gatsby? And why in the world would you put it on a school assignment? Also, credit the author when you submit.
Content: 0/10
You had lots of really obvious typos in the text. Reviewing your work can help a lot. The questions are really easy even for someone who has never read the book at all.
If I were your teacher, I would give you an F. I'm sorry, but there just isn't enough effort put into this.
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It was a great idea. The only thing is that there was no challenge whatsoever. And I suck at puzzles. Make it harder and with more variety, and it'll be a ten.
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That game had some of the worst physics that I've ever seen. I spent 70 lives trying to get off the ground. My advice would be to TEST your code before using it. Seriously.
It's a neat idea, but it so completely lacks playability that I'm afraid I just can't rate it any higher than a 3. Sorry.
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"I'm done with yo shit! I fuck you up!"
God damn.
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You just made this to piss people off, didn't you?
Unfortunately, the gameplay was pretty lame. I would have given you a higher rating if the game was more fun. And the art needed a bit of work, too. It was too MS Painted.
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But it was incredibly easy. I beat it on my first try, in only a few minutes. If there had been more and harder enemies, I would have liked it more. And the boss was pretty anticlimactic. You just move around it in a circle and keep shooting it.
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I love this game! It's so utterly unlike other games, and such a great concept! I loved the music, as well. It was well matched with the game.
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It was a fun game, but it was infuriating to have to do the whole third level over again when I died from the wizard. The music was awesome.
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