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It's fun to watch it over and over.
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I liked the way you did it. It was well suited to the song, and interesting to watch even though I'm not up on my history most of those names meant nothing to me.
The art was okay, but the animation wasn't so strong. I think that you should try not to use so many tweens. The parts during the chorus and the guy playing the guitar definitely could use some improvement. The movements were pretty awkward.
But, overall, I liked it.
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Programming: 0/10
It was incredibly frustrating to try and click on things. I'm not an ActionScripter, so I don't know what the issue is. Go to the Flash Forum on this site for some advice.
Art: 0/10
Hastily mouse-drawn. You can do better than that. The backgrounds made no sense, either.
Music: 0/10
I know this song from elsewhere. I kind of like it, but what does it have to do with The Great Gatsby? And why in the world would you put it on a school assignment? Also, credit the author when you submit.
Content: 0/10
You had lots of really obvious typos in the text. Reviewing your work can help a lot. The questions are really easy even for someone who has never read the book at all.
If I were your teacher, I would give you an F. I'm sorry, but there just isn't enough effort put into this.
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Latest Audio Reviews
That had some clever lyrics. I especially liked the line "So you bring the girls/And we'll double date (and you can pay)."
Author's Response:
Yeah man, that's one of my favorite lines too, had to sneak it in there! Thnx man!
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Seems like a panoramic shot of a war-torn battlefield or city, maybe in the WW2 era or perhaps even during the steam age. Very terse and well constructed.
Out of curiosity, what program did you use?
I'm gonna favorite it so I'm sure to see any movies it's used in, it's gonna be cool :)
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
Man, this is just great! Thanks a lot! You can expect some more tracks like this one... such kind of music is my favourite you know... =)
And the program I used? Fruity Loops! Hope this helped you somehow!
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I wouldn't say it's classical, because it has a guitar in it. I would have put it in ambient. But I guess it's not terribly important.
It's very calming, great when you're stressed. And because it's a loop, you can listen to it for as long as you want without being distracted too much. The looping-ness could be improved, though. Other than that, I'd say it's a well constructed and well performed piece of music. Good job, and it's going in my favorites.
Author's Response:
Lol yeah it says it's classical on the front page, but i recently changed it to ambient if you look again at the top of this page.
Everything you said is true. What did you mean by the 'looping-ness' of it? If you mean it doesn't sound right when it loops or if there is a little gap, its because of the player, not the song. Usually it has that gap the first time it loops and then every time it loops after that it loops smoothly.
Thanks for the review!
- Tilky
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